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Old 02-26-2005, 10:35 AM
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Another silly poem(?) from the Wolf

CATHARSIS!!!

That which without it causes someone to run –
To dash themself in bitter tears
To rend and ruin, broken and bloody
Only to find that in the end

That You Be You, and I be Me
And that which remains is a simple fact
That what destroys comes from within
And what ruins us is all inside

Not for what we have done
Or ever would – or could avoid
For the true horror is the simple truth
That we have failed to confront our self...


~Wolf

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Old 03-10-2005, 09:51 PM
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Wow,Thats a really good poem.Write much? I know a good poetry site that I have put up some of my poetry. (allpoetry.com)
 
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Old 03-10-2005, 09:59 PM
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I planted that one at www.itsonlywords.com because the Australian laws make it immediately copywritten to me - as the first to put it out there.

Almost all of what I have written is still there, under the author name: Greywolf_Hunting

Like this one:

CYBERLANDS

For many moments given to me
Brightly shining, in the Cyber Sky
I must confess my thoughts truly
I have always left here wondering why....

If things we give one another here are true -
The thoughts together that we share...
Insights that come out of the "Blue"
Why can't we find this everywhere?

But no - we must all come online
And take whatever chances...
And in protected places find
Those who reflect our glances

And jab at each the other one -
Staying through the night, until we're done
Looking perhaps to find a home -
Within the "Cybernetic Zone"....
 

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Old 03-10-2005, 10:04 PM
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Never herd of that site.I'll check it out.
 
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Old 03-10-2005, 10:14 PM
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I think there's going to be a Country Gal drop in here, most any minute now...

Then again - it might be a while
 

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I like that one also.
 
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Old 03-10-2005, 10:18 PM
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HEY! You're back...

I kind of wonder what you made of it all - but whatcha thank?
 
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Old 03-10-2005, 10:21 PM
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I think your good.Ya got really good poems.
 
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Old 03-10-2005, 10:29 PM
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I wanted to save some thoughts -and things I believed in.
Ideas that I really think are worthwhile, and stories a still want to tell the REST of.
Even if they exist only in my own mind. And maybe pass on what passes for my belief system, in some kind of a way...

Though written in fiction, fabricated to illustrate a storyline -
ME

Through and through....

When you read about the Dragon story - there is a lot of it that came from the heart. I wrote it to describe what I was thinking at that point in my life.
And I still believe that there is a power that makes things right, even if things look bad from where we are settin' at the time...

Funny how that is -

The star wars movies paralelled so much of what I really DO believe


~Wolf
 
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I visited itsonlywords a month back or so....

Sweetie, the guy is gooood!
 
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Old 03-10-2005, 10:33 PM
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I've read alot of poetry from many people,and I honestly think hes one of the best.
 
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I think back to the other night
when I said Wolf,you sure can write
 
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RS: Pleased to meet you too!

I know that a lot of people read some of my posts, and don't say anything. Some do - and I want to thank you very much!!!

It is rare that someone tells me that I really matter in some way - and to write that invites a landslide of accolades I know. I think that I understand...

But I don't really want to be famed.

I'm just me, myself, and whoever I will be.

(BUT THANKS!!!)

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Tell ya the truth - I've seen many sides of it

Big money or poverty make no real difference.

The best way to live is to be able to afford to live comfortably, have a few toys (even IF they are four wheel drive) , and throw a big party in your back yard once in a while - with all of your friends coming over.

THAT is the way to enjoy life.

~Wolf sendzz

"Yeah, I've been 'responsible' before... It's over-rated."
~H. Solo

~Wolfuss....
 

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Old 03-10-2005, 10:49 PM
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Wolf you couldn't have spoken truer words. I seem to be the happiest when I DON'T have any money. Just family and friends.
 
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I agree with that.
 


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